It was great - the changed parts fit very well now <3 You now how much I love the way you write the connection between Azzy and Rip even if it's only Janos talking about it. You can just feel the closeness between them! And Azazel was pretty much wonderful, too - his memories of Azzy are so romantic!

And as I mentioned the first time, the last line is prety much a perfect ending. And it's so easy to imagine Janos saying that <3 I like the friendship between him and Angel.