Well, I kind of already told you what I think, but...

I really love the way you played out Azazel's emotional struggle. And how you managed to keep the tone of the story a bit lighter-this has a lot of pontential to be pretty dark but you managed a tone that fits the seriousness without being overtly dramatic and dark. This little addition really rounds out the whole 'Riptide in Eight Acts' arc-I like it.