This continues to be brilliant. I love how you portray the tension between Zoe and Wash, it's really palpable.
I like the Zoe/Mal interaction in this part too.
Loved the description of Zoe's uncertainty when she was starting to fall in love with Wash and how it annoyed Mal. Very sweet and I can just picture Mal's frustration.
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Date: 2006-03-27 08:34 pm (UTC)I like the Zoe/Mal interaction in this part too.
Loved the description of Zoe's uncertainty when she was starting to fall in love with Wash and how it annoyed Mal. Very sweet and I can just picture Mal's frustration.
"Lambie-toes" - Hee!
I'm really looking forward to more of this.